Science Experiments

Question: AIM for a science report?

I did and experiment by growing seed crystals and then putting them in a saturated copper-sulphate solution to make them grow into bigger, perfect rhomic shaped crystals.
This is the aim i have :

This experiment is to show the growth of seed crystals in a saturated solution of copper sulphate and how well the crystals will grow in the solution.

I don’t think it’s very good, how can i change it?

Answer: To show the improvement of growth of seed crystals when they are grown in a saturated solution of copper sulphate

(I just think it is a little more concise and to the point)

Growing Crystals